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Aimster
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0 posted 2003-10-02 08:21 PM


Deepest of Feelings

A moment has passed, though seems more like an eternity
From out of her thoughts she comes, realising what she has to do to be free
The confusion had threatened to consume her, but she deserves more
She realises in that instant, she must begin to open the next door

Stepping out into light, after being in the dark for so long
She looks around to finally realise she is "home"
Home...what a sweet name, it's where her heart and soul will stay
While the rest of her pain and heartache, will fly far away

She never allowed someone to truly love her, though you'd never guess at first glance
Always the one giving others a second, third, fourth, then final chance
Holding it all inside, the pain that she has felt since being a small girl
She realises now it doesn't have to be anymore, it is no longer a part of her world

She tosses it to the sea, let the angry ocean waves disolve her pain at last
Looking towards her future now, she feels her heart smiling, moving farther from the past
The ocean churning with the water, it carries her secret to another land
For today when she let it all go, there she found her love, with an outstreched hand

Her "sea" now seems calmer, the waves just rolling with the tide
No longer from herself will she run, there's no more reasons to hide
Then though in a distant, she sees a dark and stormy cloud with rain
That is where it went, all her confusion and all the pain

If she truly keeps her heart free though, and lets the one she loves in her heart
Together they will be able to make that beautiful start
Hopefully she chooses the right path, because I can't watch her hurt any longer
I pray she continues to fight, and in the end comes out of it stronger


"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

[This message has been edited by Aimster (10-02-2003 08:32 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-10-02 08:40 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Amy, I certainly hope this person you are speaking of keeps perservering and following her heart, sweet friend, I understand this anguish so well and know we all support you and your loved ones! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Saunni
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2 posted 2003-10-02 08:54 PM


Awesome write all the way!! Great one Amy

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

taz08141971
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since 2003-10-01
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Mrytle Beach,SC
3 posted 2003-10-02 11:23 PM


AMY,
I CAN'T SPEAK FOR EVRYONE IN HERE BUT I WILL SAY YOUR POEMS HAVE TOUCHED A PART OF MY HEART, I CAN TELL YOU WRITE FROM YOUR HEART AND THAT IS SOMETHING SPECIAL, DON'T EVER CHANGE.I COULD ALMOST FEEL WHAT YOU WERE SAYING ABOUT HER IN THE POEM.

angelblueyes
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Oklahoma
4 posted 2003-10-03 12:50 PM


May she choose to make that start to a lifetime of happiness.Excellently penned.
Crystal

Aimster
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Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2003-10-03 07:11 PM


thank you all for your beautiful
replies. as always, means so much to
me.
take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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