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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-10-02 07:35 PM


I knew at the instant
the moment talk became cheap
Gems sold for dollars

we sell a moment
cheap in time for small fractions
no truth in its cost

in time we will find
our transgressions are payment
pay later, in hell

© Copyright 2003 Jason Lyle - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-10-02 08:28 PM


Hey Jason?

what trick do you know?
I am paying for mine as I type
*smile*
nice writing, as always
xxoo

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-10-02 08:36 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Even Chapter 1 in this process is evil to me, and soon I pray the world will be without money, capitalism, and dividends and we will give and share to one another! (sad sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-10-03 01:12 AM


What tweets said, I'm on the payment plan myself, it's the high interest that's gonna kill me before I ever get there.

(not that I plan on going there)


angelblueyes
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4 posted 2003-10-03 01:15 AM


That is one debt I intend on paying before my time.Enjoyed this read.
Crystal

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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2003-10-03 01:15 AM


I'm a slacker, who will suffer rather than pay.

Great write, sir.

Gina Culliney
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6 posted 2003-10-13 11:58 PM


I think I will file on my way.  Well penned as usual, Darkling.
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