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Street of Silent |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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{and silence my lips with your unspoken words} Perhaps Autumn will look different this year evenings slow decent from dusk the oceans view of sky: I give back that afternoon when the street was silent that season of late summer marigolds and wildflowers gentle horizons -- voices of echo {memories build their dreams} lighter than ashes, and tapping upon windows-- rain, full of ghosts somewhere, there is soft reply I listen, passing through inevitable tangles I fall into place holding a shadow: sometimes on those journeys I read aloud a stangers words-- the dark of year spins in wholeness depending on which dreams tap blue today I don't ask for reasons its a moment of gray contrast everything is beautiful while time exists song and words waiting for music this is what I find it to be, searching my heart wanting the sea The way you move me |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yes, yes, yes, memories creates dreams and beauty exists as time does too, so let the streets be filled with your fantasies and let there be wildflowers scattered all along the sides of the sidewalks and the ocean horizon swell up in the distance! (kiss on cheek) I absolutely love this, sweet friend, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"song and words waiting for music this is what I find it to be, searching my heart wanting the sea" You know..your name comes up here and I just know that when I click on the subject I am in for a wonderful read. Today's is no exception... You are a marvelous writer with remarkable talent. Thank you for this treasure. ~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just so lovely, Lauren... M |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
your words are always moving... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
{and silence my lips with your unspoken words} Perhaps Autumn will look different this year evenings slow decent from dusk the oceans view of sky: I give back that afternoon when the street was silent that season of late summer marigolds and wildflowers gentle horizons -- voices of echo {memories build their dreams} lighter than ashes, ============================ I do so love the way you turn words into whispered poetry. This one falls like a feather on the wind... I so enjoy your breezes.  "Nature's first green is gold, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You break new ground every single time. Every poem, a new lesson in writing. I truly look forward to your work -- for the sheer beauty of it, and for those little lessons in how to really make a poem happen. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Another Beauty, Lauren I agree with JM, this floats. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You always touch my heart.  This is smooth and beautiful.  Crystal |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I listen, passing through inevitable tangles I fall into place holding a shadow: sometimes on those journeys I read aloud That verse struck me so.... There is so much to love here, like the sea, your writing continues to flow freely....and once again you took me there. Only you Lady Lauren~ only you~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sometimes on those journeys I read aloud a stangers words-- the dark of year spins in wholeness depending on which dreams tap blue today I don't ask for reasons its a moment of gray contrast my dear lady... you always amaze me...and always intrigue me with your talent and the beauty of your words... SO good to read you again.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 and my heart wishes it could share a moment by the sea with you  sister of heart.....  your writing is more eloquent every day hon....remember, I WANT a autographed copy someday.....when the world reads ya hon... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Truly wonderful!! Susan |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This was worth the wait...  Lovely, Lauren. Simply lovely... Love & Light, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lauren You write with such grace! |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
nice, nice, nice. affirmed twice. Peace, Joe |
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