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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-02 05:12 PM

Falling From The Fall

green formed
veins stemming
from branches
drinking full
a spring’s sugary
tears of life
clinging closely to
the hand that
created it
innocence uncurled
in the virtue
of pure ignorance
summer found
foliage tightly huddled
in tender caress
behind each other
safely hidden
from the heat
whispers echoing from
the roof of bark
to become a
silent lapse of time
and then it
came to be
temperatures changing
divided into season
lowering to degree
a distracted illusion
a fallen disappointment
moving from upright
to downward spiral
red and golden emotions
exploded guiltlessly in
sapless gasp floating
softly in memory
for one last
good bye kiss
where leaves find
themselves on
the roots of winter
and death
is not beautiful

"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-10-02 05:13 PM

Wow... this is...wow.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2003-10-02 05:14 PM

...but real.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Lotus Breeze
Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

3 posted 2003-10-02 05:16 PM

You look at beauty and see other things, this called insight, poem is good

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-10-02 05:50 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, as a boy I also had this insight of autumn and winter, when the flowers die and animals hibernate and wind makes a haunting howl, it truly does feel like death and that is why I like spring MUCH more than autumn! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Darren
Junior Member

since 2003-09-30

Posts 30

5 posted 2003-10-02 09:05 PM

That was simply amazing Helen.

Although I disagree, there is beauty
in death. For without it life would
lose all meaning.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-10-02 09:29 PM

...*mouth hanging open*

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2003-10-02 10:49 PM

Thank you. It was good to take this walk with you, through the essence of it.

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Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

8 posted 2003-10-02 11:16 PM

Yeah, WOW is it! No words!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

9 posted 2003-10-03 12:57 PM

You've such insight that others see only through your words.
Crystal

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