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SEA
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0 posted 2003-10-02 04:30 PM



They fall
unexpressed drops
of heartbreak
a language all their own
unable to speak,
of the loss
they contain
until
her poet’s heart
hears
feels
knows

turning tears
into grief
of years
detailing
ache of sorrow
magic, her quill
to translate tears
that fall from me
into her eloquent
poetry....


~SEA~

for Marge

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vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-10-02 04:36 PM



This is beautiful, Susan.
Marge will adore it.

Hugs to you, lady...
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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2 posted 2003-10-02 04:39 PM



Marge will love this,
Susan...

you did her poetry proud!

Kaoru
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3 posted 2003-10-02 05:03 PM


Wonderful, she'll really love it. The title itself is poetry..translating tears..whew..
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4 posted 2003-10-02 05:08 PM




(smiles) You truly are someone who can translate tears with comfort and love, dearest Susan, God Bless You, YOU, sweet Susan, are magic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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5 posted 2003-10-02 05:40 PM


Beautiful Susan...Marge will love this I am sure.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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6 posted 2003-10-02 06:36 PM


Susan,

this was so beautiful! your heart as always
is shining brilliantly...Marge will love
this.
Love ya.
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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7 posted 2003-10-02 07:44 PM


SEA~
They are right, you know ... I DO love it~
Thank you always for sharing with me, both your friendship and the tears of inspire that fall from the eyes-of-your-heart to my pen~

Precious you are~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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SEA
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8 posted 2003-10-03 08:57 AM


I just wanted to take a minute, and say thank you, I know I haven't been in here much lately, and I am sorry for that. I miss you guys a lot. My time just hasn't been my own lately....but I do think of you all often.
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