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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-10-02 04:14 PM



Translating Tears
~*Marge Tindal*~

When your tears fall
I catch each tender recall
Dab it in a little ink
send it to you to see what you think~

Then you send words in praising embark
to let me know I've hit the mark
Translating tears of a friend is all
often times, before they fall~


*For SEA, she knows the why~


"You write what I feel, and express thoughts, I don't have ways of conveying
It's like they come out as tears, and somehow you translate them into words"
" Hey there is a poem for you, 'Translating Tears' "

~Thank you for entrusting me with your tears, SEA gal~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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SEA
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1 posted 2003-10-02 04:22 PM


Thank you Marge.....
for so much...
and for your KNOWING
this means the world to me
love you lady

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2 posted 2003-10-02 04:23 PM


for SEA... I would try and translate the wraiths of smoke at midnight... and I see you... translated for her heart as well as her tears..


hugs to both of you...

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Ron...
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A beautiful translation, indeed.
It is a gift when one simply knows...and understands.

Hugs to you both,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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5 posted 2003-10-02 10:20 PM


Beautifully sad, and loving!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-10-03 03:47 AM


Nice Marge...James
HopeS
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7 posted 2003-10-03 06:40 AM


Marge its of kind , caring tenderness
that your words express

Hope

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8 posted 2003-10-03 07:27 AM


this will give her great joy, how beautiful and expansive.  Lovely write
Betty
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9 posted 2003-10-03 09:47 AM


Oh Marge how beautiful this is. You are such a loving friend. :-)
Love ya,
Betty

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10 posted 2003-10-03 11:11 AM


What a lovely tranlation...friend to friend
Aimster
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11 posted 2003-10-03 05:50 PM


marge-

your "knowing" of each other is
beautiful for the rest of us to
watch. from wonderful person and poetress
to another!
take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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