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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-10-02 01:59 PM


Ich bin der Geist
der stets verneint

i've withered
stronger men than you
men of will
men of conviction
what have you but doubts?

words loom
for in truth the answer
eludes me still

the trials of facing demons

*with a nod to Goethe

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (10-02-2003 03:06 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-10-02 02:09 PM


words loom
for in truth the answer
eludes me still


Ah Raph... if you find the answer, please be sure to share it..


like this... well done sir.

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-10-02 02:13 PM


Will do Ron..and likewise let me in on anything you stumble across grin
icebox
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3 posted 2003-10-02 02:29 PM


I am the question and the answer;
I am the music and the dancer.
Whosoever believeth in me
shall not be run out of town alone,
for I am with thee.

Take your demons head on;
they are mono-directional.
Side step at the last moment
and kill them as they go past.

*grin*

Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-10-02 02:30 PM


I'll just watch
what the rest of you
stumble into...

and take note.  

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5 posted 2003-10-02 02:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Raphael, this is so wonderfully crafted, sweet friend, carry on and may that chrome armor protect you as you come across more and more hints! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is pwoerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-10-02 02:35 PM


Perhaps there are no answers--just more questions...

Peace, Love & Light,
EA

Aenimal
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7 posted 2003-10-02 03:05 PM


grins excellent advice ice grins

thanks Karilea grins

Thanks Noah as always

always more questions Linda but this is one i have to answer

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-10-02 03:36 PM


within this man
ideals and answers
lie in wait
biding time
from frost of lip
to breath of life
in doubt
and fear
he finds
himself
and when this clock
chimes truth
soul ascends
to peace

Raph . . .
you will get this answer
*smile*
(made me go read, how dare you!)
xxoo

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
9 posted 2003-10-02 04:11 PM


Goethe...GOETHE.. you genius.


Aenimal
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10 posted 2003-10-02 04:21 PM


thanks sue

thanks meg grins

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11 posted 2003-10-02 10:53 PM


I don't think there are words I could use, to help me explain how I feel everytime I read your words.....I am just speechless, and so wishing any of my thoughts could even come close.....what a talent you have.....really!!

Lauren~

There's a song inside  my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

Aenimal
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12 posted 2003-10-02 11:29 PM


Lauren now you know how I feel everytime you write...so there grins
inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2003-10-03 08:58 AM


raffi, raffi, raffi..........
Brad Majors
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14 posted 2003-10-03 09:21 AM


as always amazing
Susan Caldwell
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15 posted 2003-10-03 10:16 AM


Ron stole my favorite lines...*pout*

Outstanding!

Susan

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