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Of A Day and Blue |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Too the blue of today’s sky Matches the flecks of color Along the edges of your iris And I match the clouds That would float along the currents Thoughtfully shown As you move to glance First not my way Then perhaps to see at least The shadow of me Passing o’er the ground. Those shadows do not last For nothing stands in static repose Waiting forever And I am left with this The cobalt thoughts And simple azure flecks Of being recognized. Tell me, Does this envelope of air Support your lungs enough To breathe in the shades Of what in dream I’d be to you Or do you gasp In darker palettes The passing shadows Of what you do not See? Too the sky changes And my thoughts move To autumn’s hues |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Breathtaking Ron... Beautiful..truly beautiful. ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A beauty Ron Stellar! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I breathed in all the hues you so skillfully and poetically painted...  Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I love your writing...you are able to bring reality to everything you touch, so much so that one would assume your life was filled to overflowing with experiences and dreams ...*smiling* and then you fees up and say nope, not so...and leave the reader guessing which are pure writing skill and which are from your heart...for you do both just as well... this one...I think...lives in your heart.. wonderful write my friend |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful Ron...and I, while blindfolded, wonder the same  M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How boring, if things were not to change... how much reality you give you, floating the cloud... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) And all the same as the seasons change and so do the skies, the blue is still there, only imbued in some grayer and golden shades! (big hugggsssssss) You always paint a wonderful photomontage, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron.....The colors in your pallet may change, but not the beauty that comes from your heart in peotic thought. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Too the sky changes And my thoughts move To autumn’s hues"" Such peaceful hues......beautiful.....  Lauren~ The way you move me |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The use of "too" is what reeled me in.. beautiful... Susan |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
amazing |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Those shadows do not last For nothing stands in static repose Waiting forever And I am left with this The cobalt thoughts And simple azure flecks Of being recognized. It was the blue that caught my eye, and I can only stare at the beauty and all the feelings that dance across my mind. Cpat~ I don't know what to say, I'm afraid the sun has caught me crying. So nice~ |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This blue you've shown well. Crystal |
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