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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2003-10-02 09:19 AM



It isn't the way the sun
touches your face in the
mornings, when its just us.

It isn't the way the stars
fall into your eyes then laugh
back at me.

It isn't the way your
hand always finds mine
right before sleep.

It isn't the way you look
it isn't the things you do
it isn't what you say.

It's more.

© Copyright 2003 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
dingusjr
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1 posted 2003-10-02 09:20 AM


Simple little poem, clearly written.
I like!   Larry

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2 posted 2003-10-02 09:23 AM


Oh so very sweet. Exactly the words I needed to see at this very moment. Glad I came.

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Aimster
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3 posted 2003-10-02 09:46 AM


beautiful!! this shows your love
clearly.
take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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4 posted 2003-10-02 06:25 PM






(smiles) Oh Paula, this is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, and may love, the most gorgeous thing in all the world, forever sing in your heart and continue to show you all the beauties it is, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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