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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2003-10-02 07:20 AM



The Trump Card

no, I don’t know
the game of hearts
but understand the hurts
of the fault line
from confusion
being inside out
we are tight
close suited friends
my pulse beats
the same in each
except when it rises
between breaths
and when things turn
around in forgiveness

"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-02 08:09 AM


*sighing here*
forgiveness feels so good
enjoyed the thoughts and feelings here

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2 posted 2003-10-02 10:34 AM


enjoyed,,,

                                                                   

alisa
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3 posted 2003-10-02 02:11 PM



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4 posted 2003-10-02 02:29 PM




(smiles) Forgiveness is one of the most beautiful things and though it is hard to accomplish sometimes, the burden is always lifted when one has the virtue to carry out the word! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Darren
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5 posted 2003-10-02 09:08 PM


Good call partner...
it certainly does the 'trick'
While i've had other good partners
none were quite as 'slick'

Darren.

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6 posted 2003-10-02 10:34 PM


So clear, so true to feelings that I have had....and so beautifully captured. Sometimes you're a joy to read.

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