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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-10-02 04:05 AM



My love, to see words of love
you express so warm,
my beloved, you make me believe,

For your love would the soul of doubt
disarm,Your heart beams a ray which will
never deceive,

Feasting upon your eyes,
my soul hugers no more,deep velvet,rich love does flow,for your love is plenty,
Feasting upon you, the mind,
the heart, all of you I must implore,

Let our bodies meet, I must have you, within our castle we can love for hours together,
Through loves snowy weather,
If thy passion fails to please,
my heart, my love would freeze,

As the leaves fall into the valleys of earth,
so shall my love fall into every corner of yor heart, bringing joy, loves rebirth,

Golden summers shall bring loves pleasures,
early spring my love will meet, join your heart,
complete,Completion, loves full measure,

Ten thousand hours apart,
Wrapped into one moment of a two minute meeting,
Passing are the days, departures sorrow is slowly fleeting,

All saved for that golden moment of love, that golden hour, a dozen goldenroses blooming, my heart now becomes a flower,twelve roses, twelve reasons why his love is so consuming.


True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (10-02-2003 02:39 PM).]

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n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception
1 posted 2003-10-02 04:14 AM


bless my soul!!! I want one of those.  Very beautiful, dear lady.  One lucky person... the object of your musing.  thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2003-10-02 07:28 AM


My my my that is just so durn purty!!!

Good work!!

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2003-10-02 08:03 AM


very beautiful writing.  enjoyed.
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-10-02 06:04 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is so gorgeously romantic, sweet friend, I am so happy for you and your love and I wish eternal happiness for you forever brighter than yellow roses! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-02-2003 06:05 PM).]

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2003-10-02 06:13 PM


Noah thank you so much for the dozen roses, I needed them today, your words and flowers cheered me up!

This poem is not about or to anyone! just my wishes and daydreams, my love has left my heart, by his choosing.

Thanks again for your warm words that are so beautiful and touching!

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

SongVixen
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since 2003-07-06
Posts 43
England
6 posted 2003-10-03 02:11 AM


How could anyone leave a loving heart like yours? Just look at the love pouring out of you.



Hope and peace, more fishes in the sea love
~*Natasha*~

rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27
Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA
7 posted 2003-10-03 04:01 AM


that poem kicks some   ...   I've never read your work before but I will look forward to it from now on.

The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2003-10-03 04:25 AM


Thanks SongVixen

Thanks rkcraig! glad you liked it, at least somone appreciated it!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

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