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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
I had the best woman in the world, then I had to make her go away. I miss her momentarily. In my sleeping I felt your presence though your image fades into the effervescence I can meet you in the sleeping silence though this missing feels so timeless I never wanted to stop loving you, I thought, “I’m stupid, not a fool” Always being ... faithful to none Only wanting you, now that it’s done Pondering those moments past and near does naught but many times bring a tear of moments past, none lost to the years they were not wasted, though left in tears Oh, to hear those words of affection so warmly spoken in my direction without a hint of false inflection Never knowing deceit or rejection You, beloved, are so terribly missed this aching feeling will not desist To once again by your side exist calls for grace abounding to resist Know well this, you are keenly missed In all my doings your thought persists Comings and goings, in all that exists even... when by my grandkids I’m kissed I pray you Love, and Peace aboundin’ In all you do, Happiness is found in A song of Joy in your heart asoundin’ Warmth and safety, for you surroundin’ Love always, Joe Peace, Joe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joe~ There is such a soft wistfulness to this write~ 'this missing feels so timeless' Yes ...~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Joe, This was so sad yet beautiful. Remember something though...it is better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all. Those are words I truly believe in. This was beautifully written. Take care. Amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
You sound a little responsible for your own unwilling to commit. Your response to my daughters last write was right on. Sunshinemc Joe, I take it is your name, good writing. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Joe just hold on to the memories.  Love, Terri~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May you each find happiness on your now separate paths. I enjoyed the monorhymes.  Love & Light, Linda |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
folks, thank you again. I cherish your input, and also respect constructive negative feedback, when offered. You guys sure make a person feel appreciated. Peace, Joe |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Joe~ You possess many depths..and they are all astonishingly beautiful. Susan |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Is this a common genetic trait in men? Someone needs to wake them up! shake them or something. Why do they always treat the one person they love the most so badly? Then after it is over, regret it? Where is the logic? but love isn't logical! Enjoyed your true feelings, thanks for sharing them! I didn't mean to come across so cross, excuse my feelings, I have just had a bad day, for two days! Dealing with my own loss at the moment. My feelings are not directed at you! It was a beautiful heart felt poem!!!!!  ~ARH [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (10-03-2003 06:45 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
I can speak only for myself, I drove my love away out of blind fear and foolish pride. Thinking I needed no one, then my two year old daughter taught me the greatest lesson in my life and I determined to reclaim my love. Wish me luck! This poem is...at the risk of sounding cliche' it's awsome. I very much enjoyed and relate to this one. Thank you for sharing it. |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
susan thank you for each and every kind word arheart with that kind of talk you can vent on my string anytime. thank you joe I am truly glad you liked it, and could relate. In times past much of problem solving was done in council/counsel with the elders. we each have something to offer other men. write you experience - let it be your muse Peace, Joe |
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