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n2dmystic
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beyond the doors of perception

0 posted 2003-10-02 03:32 AM



The Illusion of Reality

Circles of healing
  go ‘round
  in open ended moments

Never returning
  to the static point
  which doesn’t exist

Impermanence being the
  constant

Fluctuations of heart
  enveloping
  the mind

Causing reaching
  deep into
  the illusion
  of pain

Forbidding peace
  for a time

As the dross
  burns the very soul

Another attempt
  at love…
  masks, dilutes, deludes
  the reality
  of illusory
  pain

Causing …
  reaching
  beyond
  to the
  higher Self
  

© Copyright 2003 Joseph D. Carreno II


Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

[This message has been edited by n2dmystic (10-02-2003 11:06 AM).]

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-10-02 10:10 AM


enjoyed,,,
ECL
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2 posted 2003-10-02 10:27 AM


Good poem Joe!
As the dross
  burns the very soul

I had to look up what dross meant!
Works very well her.


Sunnyone
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3 posted 2003-10-02 10:34 AM


Excellent write Joe!  I've often wondered about the word 'reality', and I agree with your thoughts here...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

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4 posted 2003-10-02 12:29 PM


nicely done... I enjoyed!
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5 posted 2003-10-02 04:18 PM




(smiles) Oh Joseph, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, love is always worth reaching for, even when it tantalizes us, and you are destined to find that illusions can feel real in reality! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

n2dmystic
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6 posted 2003-10-03 12:03 PM


thank you all for the kind comments.  My life is a spiritual journey on this physical plane.  Reality is illusory, the only constant being change.  thank you again

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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