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ctowen
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0 posted 2003-10-02 01:14 AM


Skyward
the waves flee
for freedom

thus escaping
gravity of tides shaping

scattered 'bout debris
like driftwood

out of the crowd

gathering another cloud
sails above the sea,
effortless

upon wind's breath,
a journey

such a skies death
giving life
to the air we breathe

One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

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1 posted 2003-10-02 02:20 AM






(sigh) Ominous skies often reap such great rewards, sweet friend, hi-yo Mayflower, away! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a most relaxed write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2003-10-02 02:22 AM



Simply beautiful, Craig.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

n2dmystic
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beyond the doors of perception
3 posted 2003-10-02 03:11 AM


very nice write, thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2003-10-03 02:56 PM


This is wonderful, and beautiful..deserves a big

bump!

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2003-10-03 03:11 PM


Very nice!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-10-03 03:13 PM


Beautifully written Craig!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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In Your Poetic Mind
7 posted 2003-10-03 04:02 PM


Sail on.....this is most beautiful and peaceful.....I feel the breeze


ME~

There's a song inside  my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

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