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sunshinemc
Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 27


0 posted 2003-10-02 12:06 PM



No positve outlook
no tomarrow
no i love you
only sorrow
no reason why
or notice in advance
you moved right on
leavin me with a broken chance
Rememberin yesterday
endless love
Remembering you
sent from above
Lookin in the mirror
eyes filled with tears
happiness is gone
escaped with 2 empty years
Thinking of your touch
so simply satisfied
thinking of our past
filled with lies
Hoping that a smile
will soon reach my face
hoping that these feelings
are easily erased
Sending out a plea
puttin on a show
my body feels so empty
my spirits, so low

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wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2003-10-02 12:21 PM


Time to start looking up sunshine!

Nice write.

~Uncle

Mistletoe Angel
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Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2003-10-02 01:51 AM






(big hugggsssssss) Oh dearest friend, keep looking up as high above is where you are destined and hope and faith will keep you from looking low, sweet friend, much better times are coming your way, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-10-02 02:50 AM


The show must go on...
but it's hard, I know.

Nicely done by you~

n2dmystic
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception
4 posted 2003-10-02 02:55 AM


remember, grieving is a process.  you gotta acknowledge, embrace, and lean into your pain.  there is no majic, just time and being open to the pain.  blessings,

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

PouringJewels
Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158
Maryland
5 posted 2003-10-02 09:12 AM


N2 dmystic said it best. Age doesn't have a thing to do with hurt. But the older you get the more one want it now. love you more.
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