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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2003-10-01 11:38 PM



Forever flowers come to bloom
The insects know their day is doom
And some will think their life begun
Their colors cold come fade the sun

Worldly thoughts dispel with haste
I need no wares where love is placed
At heart’s domain we always lived
And under grace that God forgives

To live for this and when we die
Our love will bloom into the sky
Spreading seeds where life’s begun
What man can shade what God has done?

© Copyright 2003 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Tim
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1 posted 2003-10-01 11:40 PM


you are on a roll tonight Walt, another good'un
angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-10-01 11:40 PM


Man may shade it for a time, but God will always triumph in the end.Excellently penned.
Crystal

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3 posted 2003-10-02 01:33 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Nothing can mimic or best our Father's act of grace, and when all seems lost, the flower shall bloom on and on in perennial! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I have missed your poetry very much, welcome back, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vlraynes
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4 posted 2003-10-02 01:58 AM



Walty...this is beautiful, my friend.
Good to see you here...
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27
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beyond the doors of perception
5 posted 2003-10-02 03:25 AM


SAA ~ (standing and applauding)  that's all.

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

QjQ
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6 posted 2003-10-02 10:26 AM


very good penning,,,,

                                                                   

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2003-10-02 10:37 AM


been missing the rhyme of you..sounded nice read aloud, too

M

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