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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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you words are leaves strewn across an empty street beautiful but lifeless desperation isn't love |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very true! Excellent write! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
WOW!!!You've awed me.  Crystal |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Desperation isn't love, but love can bring desperation....and leaves fall both ways, if you wait for them. I have seen it myself. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) Yes, love is more about waiting patiently as each leaf falls and letting each one run its own course until finally each leaf is free! (sigh) There there's no desperation, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks everyone, i'd respond individually but lack the energy..bloody cold |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh!!! How fleeting!  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you words are leaves strewn across an empty street beautiful but lifeless desperation isn't love so much said in so few but eloquent words.... and yes, i wonder too, in their beautyy as they scatter the ground, are they alive or dead....when they could take off and "see" places only i could imagine |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such a powerful image you created .... I can feel the cold breeze of loneliness. Desperation is a moment of detachment from LOVE .... Sei malinconico. Un abbraccio. Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
far from it Raph, far from it *smile* xxoo |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Hope the cold is better Raph... nice and tight, this one, no wasted words and strong in images... brings to mind several thoughts that springboard off the premise, so for me..it is inspiration and insight.. enjoyed.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow Bello M fate is not just |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You just made my day. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks everyone and Ron, only slightly better but thanks for the thought |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Indeed, Raph |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks Meg some people don't get the difference and it's sad to watch |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
OK..count me as one who appreciates this little poem. powerfull. Larry |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sometimes, the truth is just that.....excellent as always..... Lauren~ The way you move me |
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Nina Jeffries New Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 3 |
In desperation I made a bad mistake My whole illusion melted like a flake A flake of snow that once fell on my toe Your poem is beautiful, mine is what happened to me. Thank God life goes on. Nina |
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