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looking for a condition
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looking for a condition |
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John B Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 68Texas, USA 
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looking for a condition against health where i can be blinded with science yet never mad with my lies...because faith is the only place we'd ever hide. looking for my vision against stealth where i can be told sin is like i thought... no one's ever sinning, they just think they're caught. no, no! faith is where i hide my friends, this name is one given to a veteran but not a has-been although many came within. i come for hidden faith and therein i'll pride these sins, but i won't try to erase the past because faith is the only place i ever knew to hide.. where we self applaud this ride... and i'm left looking for a condition that i already knew who, what, when, where, and how to justify. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed,,,, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very original poem, a thorough analysis that made me think! Not sure whether I get it right though ... .... "sins" are learning processes and faith is the condition showering you with love and compassion ... in faith there is peace ... science unfolds mysteries and is fascinating and even more so when there is the awareness of spirit in All that is. Love, Margherita  |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You bring many thoughts to mind with this, although I do agree with Margherita.Thoughts well penned. Crystal |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Enjoyed |
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