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In The Wind Weep

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Marge Tindal
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In The Wind Weep
~*Marge Tindal*~

I hear tears in the wind weep
across a broken heart they sweep
bending laurels of the bough
melancholy refrain ... of long gone now~

Wind weep circles on a shroud of gray
blowing me about in complete disarray
I felt them coming but did not heed
the warning of this heart in need~

Running from shadows of yesterdays' pain
I slip and cannot my footing regain
Wind weep sweeps me against my will
in tears of shed ... ever still~

In the wind weep I find you gone
I know not where ... but, oh too long
No one to shelter me from the seep
of the thrashing, smashing wind in weep~

I cower beneath the earthen sheets
alone ...
alone in the wind weep~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Marge~
This touches...in places deep...
Understanding Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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2 posted 10-01-2003 06:57 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Enjoyed this.
Martie
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Marge/sis....Melancholy beauty.  
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4 posted 10-01-2003 07:21 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful write, my friend... I'm sorry some listens bring you weep.
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Love your turnabout language...and this poem all the way through.

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6 posted 10-01-2003 08:29 PM       View Profile for Paul Wilson   Email Paul Wilson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Wilson

Marge...Your talent amazes me.

I find myself in awe of you
Each time I read you on these pages of blue
Your words paint such beauty thru and thru
These words of praise I send to you

Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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Marge  
I like.
John B
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i enjoy the way you set this forth..
kind of like words wearing a tank top..
Betty
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I really love this one.
Love ya,
Betty
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I'm sorry that anything brings you tears, but you've shown it true here.
Crystal
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Deepest appreciation to each of you for letting me know you found a touching moment in this piece~

Sometimes the wind weep wears us down, etching tearful memories deeply into the crevices of our soul~

But, we try to wear the smiles of yesterday and hold the memories dear~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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again, I have to smile at your knowing and tell you, this touches.....and that picture is amazing
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I got all tingly reading this. It was as if the wind was weeping through my spirit...

Huggums,
Linda
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Marge, you always have so much to satisfy my senses as I read...words, great images...what a pleasure it is!!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

Marge Tindal
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SEA~
You have channeled through me so many, many times~
You and I are of the knowing~

EarthyOne~
Thank you for letting it touch you~

SunnyOne~
What a gifting to see you here~
Appreciating the gentle of your reply~
*Huglets* all~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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Hello Marge

Your words were so very moving, yet so very beautiful.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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This, Marge, is an excellent piece of poetry...just haunting.

Remember, gone is not gone...forever is not forever....

And no separation can overcome the soul's own seeking for that which will -- inevitably -- complete it.

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Not sure how I missed this, must have been that computer gremlin, but darn glad I found it!

This touched my heart and soul and I could feel it way down deep. Sometimes we just have to bury the tears and sorrow under a smile but it is so important to acknowledge that the pain is there!

May the wind wash over us every now and then.

Hugs for a special gem ... Marti
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19 posted 10-09-2003 11:54 AM       View Profile for allamericanjoe   Email allamericanjoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for allamericanjoe

sad poem.  But without pain, joy would not be nearly as easily recognized.  Nice write!

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time"  ~James taylor~

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You know Marge, a gentle wind really can have that sound and feel
of a woman wistfully sighing...

Softly blowing against your neck...
Revealing all the secrets, she never could before...

It really can be a stirring feel...


Just like this poem...

Richy
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been missing your words, my friend...

thanks
sudhir
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22 posted 10-09-2003 05:20 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Dear Marge:

Just incredible.  Such a sense of mystery and mourning!  A wonderful poem and the graphic is perfect!  So glad I got to read this!

Love
Betty Lou

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~~~~sigh~~~~ I know the feelings of this. I am otherwise speechless here.  Loved this. It spoke to me and I found the response:
The Wind Changes

(((HUGS)))
Sherry

Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today.

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this was absolutely touching....how beautiful were your words, so bittersweet and filled with love.  The picture is awesome...images filled with hope and trust.  Thank you so very much for sharing.
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