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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-01 05:04 PM

Does What Comes Around…

heaven comes
in seamless lines
wrapped in boundaries
a razor splitting
a single hair
and I stand
warming in
a candle’s flame
holding an
unopened letter
wondering which
bill is
now overdue

"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-10-01 05:11 PM

*sigh....

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-10-01 05:13 PM

OK get outta my head Helen
(it is soo crowded in there . . .)
like the metaphor
*smile*
xxoo

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2003-10-01 05:22 PM

At first I thought it was winsome then I laughed my head off.
Good one.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

4 posted 2003-10-01 05:39 PM

In general, it does.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2003-10-01 05:46 PM

Some dues, seem to never get paid...

Thanks Helen!

Enjoyed!
Richy

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-10-01 07:00 PM

Only if you send it.

Send it.

Only if you say it.

Say it.

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______________Ratleader______________

jasonm
New Member

since 2003-10-01

Posts 8

7 posted 2003-10-02 03:42 AM

I find your poetry delicate and substantial at the same time. Like riddles you can't quite pin an answer to, they stick, and keep asking questions.

[This message has been edited by jasonm (10-02-2003 03:43 AM).]

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

8 posted 2003-10-02 03:47 AM

uhmmm, i like it, but it is a little (lot) vague for my concrete head. thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-11-14 01:04 AM

yes...sigh

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

10 posted 2003-11-14 01:16 AM

Some things come around, some things go around. Some things stay, and sit on the shelf until the envelope reseals from its own weight. The trick is to know whether it's an opening or a re-opening.

~~J

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2003-11-14 04:36 PM

enjoyed this

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2003-11-14 07:44 PM

sighs

ranidae_poet
Member

since 2003-11-05

Posts 66
Texas,USA

13 posted 2003-11-14 08:15 PM

i like.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

14 posted 2003-11-14 08:43 PM

Neat my friend - and what the others said - and I definitely understand the last couple of lines!!

jwesley

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