Open Poetry #29 |
In Mirrored Reflection |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Reflections in the mirror all I can see is that what you have left behind tattered, worn, with no beauty left inside, no...I can not run from the mirror... and no longer can I hide. I try to stare past into what used to be... but reflections in the mirror are all that I can see.... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-01-2003 03:06 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I really adore the truth in this, the honesty. Thank you. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna...Your true reflection is the one from your heart, and I see nothing but kindness & grace. That other mirror reflects only what he wants you to see. Throw it away. Take Care....Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
After lots of soul-searching, and lots of tears, all of that, and time, it gets better. I hope you heal speedy. Love, Terri~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (10-01-2003 04:25 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So sad, but so efficiently expressed. Look deeper, past the past and past the pain ... your radiance shines through, promise! Love, Margherita |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I try to stare past into what used to be... but reflections in the mirror are all that I can see.... mirrors have a habit, by design, of not being able to look into the past...only into the now... nicely done... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Nicely said, Donna. Hugs to you, my friend... When the power of love overcomes the |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now don't be making me send you a new mirror...for what I see...is a survivor.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
again my thanks to all, hugs. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-02-2003 08:19 AM).] |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Donna you know that I know. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
SE I do know that you know. You know how much I enjoy Tobies music and today I think the fav line stuck in my head is "I'm getting by but the truth is I'm still standing knee deep in yesterdays rain..." ah...sing it Toby. too. It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Toby Keith...Nancy asks? Donna...you are a survivor... and you've come a long long way... There is a beautiful lady in the mirror looking back at you. ~Smiles & Heart Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nancy... thank you for your support.. always. Heart hugs back atcha... oh um yeah...Toby Keith the song is called (I think..don't have the cd cover with me today..) Yesterdays Rain [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-02-2003 01:53 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Donna, I usually don't listen to country music (though I absolutely love the Dixie Chicks) but I've heard about Toby Keith and this is a beautifully inspired poem, sweet friend, I love it, you always write with heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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