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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-10-01 11:44 AM



There are boundaries.

Perhaps our touch will only
reach so far?

Penetrating less then the level
of the skin.

It is only the hearts desire for
more that we ever really
know.

Perhaps the flesh deceives?

And we know nothing.

Yes...there are boundaries.

Yet there are worlds that exist in
the layers found between.

Perhaps our touch is born
from there?

Passing through the thickened walls
of self denial and mortal
sins.

It is only by the hearts desire for
more...that we truly know the
taste of holy love.

Perhaps the flesh delivers?

And we know everything.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-10-01 11:45 AM


Amazing, I want to save this
Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-10-01 12:20 PM


Yes...perhaps, all these things are so.
Wonderful write Eric.
~Hugs~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-10-01 12:22 PM


yes, I have my boundaries

well done Eric

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4 posted 2003-10-01 01:03 PM


Eric~

'Yet there are worlds that exist in
the layers found between.

Perhaps our touch is born
from there?'


How this thought envelops me~
Wonderful writing my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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5 posted 2003-10-01 01:32 PM




(sigh) Perhaps not boundaries...but rather just realms! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, love certainly has the ability to access every chamber, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Martie
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6 posted 2003-10-01 01:35 PM


Ericc....You always touch the most intricate truth like it was the easiest thing to do.  A fine talent!
Margherita
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7 posted 2003-10-01 05:52 PM


You explore divine depth so beautifully .... in flesh and in spirit you touch upon truth, sacred truth. In the moment you are aware of boundaries, your touch of love transforms them in transparencies, where we can mirror the sacredness of our existence, of our bond.
I love you, Margherita

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8 posted 2003-10-01 10:59 PM


Love is.

It transcends what we know as holy
...higher and lower and equal.

Holy is.

It transcends what we know as love
...higher and lower and equal.

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Etain
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9 posted 2003-10-01 11:10 PM


It's a gift to read you again.
No boundaries when the world
is all inside us.
A caring hug,
Etain.

angelblueyes
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10 posted 2003-10-01 11:17 PM


Many things to think about that you've provoked here.Nice penning.
Crystal

BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2003-10-01 11:55 PM


You've conveyed a sense of reality here, that does indeed, absorb the flesh.  It's what it is,  that lies within.

Such a nice touch Ericc~  

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12 posted 2003-10-02 10:38 PM


Boundaries have to be set for morals to survive.

Nice write Eric~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

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