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She asks "Who will embrace me, when you are gone?"
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She asks "Who will embrace me, when you are gone?" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Who could not want to embrace you squeeze your soul within an inch of its aura every second you are alive? You sigh and say who will embrace me when you are gone? I will For you shall never lose my scent I leave trails for you to follow pockets overflow spilling each hour of unconditional you gave and give to this mind You will never lose me For I hold you dear mother in every second I breathe iron cast love You may be stung left among those who choose to shy away from familiar skin And I will wonder how they can manage so distant from you earth mother your very nature carried roots deep to yours and entwined Our embrace mother is a dip in the wind a place serene that never ceases to exist together and apart Who will hold you, when I am gone? I will. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ohh gemma - but you have been holding each other far before your time on this plane This I know in my chest You are reaching heights unimaginable xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (10-01-2003 08:52 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful and loving words... so nice to read you, gemma ~smiles M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
gem, this was not only astounding and giving, but an understanding far beyond most your age...your a beautiful young lady, both inside as well as out. smiles and hugs, thank you for your charm, inspiration....and perception of hope. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very very nice touching tribute....I enjoyed the read very much! Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
again..bravo... you each here into a tender..and deliver it palms up to someone who cares and needs to know always..how much.. very nice Gemma.. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful Gem. Eric |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gem.. this is beautiful.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Gemma, I am blown away by the sentiments and love in this. A remarkable and brilliant write. Hugs, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
*sigh* Beautiful. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
such a tender beautiful tribute, gemmagal  celebrating a neverendinglove between two lucky souls |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this so tender and softly beautiful |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*a really really really long sigh* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This was a bit different from the way you usually write....and equally as beautiful.. Susan |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Gemma...this is absolutely beautiful, and so deeply touching... Thank you for sharing it. Hugs,  ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I'd embrace you if you left but don't ever leave or i will die. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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