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Your Hurt in His Hand (2nd Post)
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Your Hurt in His Hand (2nd Post) |
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Ku'uipo Junior Member
since 2003-09-25
Posts 42 |
Listen to the silence Hear it tread on steady waters A tear is not heard until it screams Laughter unnoticed, a smile forlorn A stream of pain is held too long The face of a woman deceives the day The cry of a woman impermiates the night Hanging hearts can bleed eternal The hope it hides can die today Embrace the truth Prolong no anguish Seek the faith of a coming day Softly touch and gently speak A kind word returns as rage A tender kiss can be forgotten Take hold the hand of diligence lost Wipe away the glance of lonely dismay Watch them fall Feel them burn See as he holds your hurt in his hand Copyright ©2003 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Emotional pain well imaged in this piece.... Good write! Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
See as he holds your hurt in his hand... yes... I enjoyed your words M |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ku' the palm tells stories of its own A tear is not heard until it screams One intricate amazing line, in itself Beautiful writing xxoo |
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