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Ku'uipo
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since 2003-09-25
Posts 42


0 posted 2003-10-01 07:39 AM



Dear lover
I fell into your hands and you into my heart
I wept tears and you wept no more
The stars shone bright and the clouds disappeared
And still i sit here writing about love
Another word written
Another song sung
And still i sit here writing about love
Hope was found and fear was lost
Laughter rang high and silence drew near
I saw my soul and lost sight of my pain
And still i sit here writing about love
My heaven was blurred and your dreams came true
My hurt wilted away and i only saw you
My tears, my song, your dreams from above
And still i sit here writing about love
Sincerely yours...

© Copyright 2003 Ku'uipo - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-10-01 07:42 AM


this brought a warm smile to my heart...a lovely write, which sings of the blossom and expanse of love....wishing you the wealth of companionship in this one you write about.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-10-01 08:35 AM


beautiful sentiments

M

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-10-01 08:50 AM


Ku' - as we seem to do . . .

And still i sit here writing about love
Another word written
Another song sung
And still i sit here writing about love

always always the case
Welcome , I have missed your entrance
I do apologize
you write beautifully
xxoo

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
4 posted 2003-10-01 02:07 PM


very nice write n read,,,

                                                                   

J. K. Mitchell
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since 2002-01-12
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GA
5 posted 2003-10-01 02:45 PM


Very nice.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2003-10-03 03:55 AM


Enjoyed...James
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
7 posted 2003-10-03 11:41 AM


always about love...

yes...

Welcome!

Susan

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8 posted 2003-10-03 11:21 PM




(smiles) And how could we not, for I find it is impossible not to write about love as love is everything natural and melodic! (big hugggsssssss) May you always write with love straight from your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ku'uipo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SecretiveLife
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since 2003-09-24
Posts 8

9 posted 2003-10-03 11:31 PM


Lovely poem.. Great way of putting it.. Welcome!

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