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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Poetic feet, standing in place, rocking back and forth With sensations…meanings, capable of producing things of quality and great beauty Struggling to realize the dreams of a better world The eyes of sanity in a blizzard of madness Against a grunge spreading like malignancy But hope like the voodoo priest still casting spells Of pink clustered flowers within framing azaleas With no strong desire to possess, merely taking pleasure in it’s existence Envy is a mental theft with a strong desire to possess Borrow the idea of creating an evolving self in sequence to kind Allow….to ask of a thing beyond reach, but do not yearn and weep Rendering step by step, the ultimate point of impulse To their own time, a singular intensity, holding my small hand Somehow reaches languid eyes, telling of wars and fierce heart’s A wondrous child are you! Each thought delights upon immortal wine! I have seen light in the woods scrambling out of bed Molten amber radiance from which seemed to appear hands Placing against my sores, insuring my being, precision of powers Dumbfounds my flesh, ignorant to the thickened perfume of magical hours The sea welds her flame in my eyes, royalty of blazing stars, Swinging lanterns bright, I tremble in romantic glows Of gently curling rainbows….. Nothing is alone nor hopeless, as the world amorously weaves There is reason for my relief and the rude bird of winter’s wings Foretelling what must live, serving liquid notes of spring Courageous explorations with numerous rituals inspiring Clearly a wonderful cradling message, leading us to a tender fountain Oh how pearled the mission, worshiping the sky, come, lean on my shoulder Young and foolish eyes…embroidering gold and silver dreams seeds a fire Like a lover’s sigh And the responses around our themes, feelings and beliefs And so dream and remember, in your heart is a face Whose charm will stay with your forever… Carved by a mighty race and subtle mystery, prophetic and renowned Through life’s misery, hear & vision the great language of love Who with discerning ears, delight among the streams of womanhood! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
what a wonderful way to start my day reading this nice write,,,, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I don't know how you do it...you include so many thoughts and feelings in each poem you write and never seem to repeat yourself...I have a lot to learn  Thank you, M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ There are so many lines that are poems within themselves. A delight to read.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Lee... the complex weave of word an image to be admired... |
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