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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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To Begin My feet are tired of the muck The more aspire the more I’m stuck I cannot shake the core that clings No matter how I rake the things. I seek a clear and crystal shore One without a brown décor or One with tranquil skies of blue or Just some time alone with you So why is that so hard to find Find that peace within my mind to Clear the static of the day Escape the mud and make my way If only I could rise and fly Make my way within the sky Build a castle in the air Lift you up into its lair If you would breath upon my skin I think the process could begin |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
 good morning!This made me think of how I feel at the moment, the more i try to forget, the more I remember. If you would breath upon my skin I think the process could begin you have breathed upon mine this morning, perhaps nudging the process along a bit, so thankyou.  ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop Happy breathing,  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya kiddo, and top of the morning to ya I think, you need a vacation, in the Bahamas, bring your lovely Isabel and I'll meet you both there at Christmas...show you around the island, and leave you both alone on a lovely deserted beach with white sand, tropical weather, passionate warming sun and quiet like you've never heard before...and then, and then, well, sir, then, you and Isabel can let your imaginations take over...wooooohooooo, whataya say? Sending smiles and hugs...and as always a very good write and read. Have a loverly day, today, tomorrow and always. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
seek a clear and crystal shore One without a brown décor or One with tranquil skies of blue or Just some time alone with you If only I could rise and fly Make my way within the sky Build a castle in the air Lift you up into its lair If you would breath upon my skin I think the process could begin ================================== look at you....painting *sighs* across my skies. what moth could resist the wistful, tender, longing in this lovely offering. And that closing couplet... thats a Sy-sigh waiting to happen.   *winkiewinkie*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lee, Thank you for the kind invite and the top of the morn to you. JM, Is that you breathing on me? WWRS |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Methinks you just need a hot cup of tea. What do you say Sy?! Loved your morning verse..always look for you first thing. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sy, you do fly . . . grab hold of that flying partner and take to the sky . . . If only I could rise and fly Make my way within the sky Build a castle in the air Lift you up into its lair Beautiful stanza xxoo |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah yes definietly the process would begin....Lovely metpahors all the way through.....Great writing Sy! This is nobly romantic.. "I seek a clear and crystal shore One without a brown décor or One with tranquil skies of blue or Just some time alone with you" Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But you DO rise, and you most certainly fly... and leave us here to dream with our Sy... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
If you would breath upon my skin I think the process could begin LoL!!!!  [This message has been edited by QjQ (10-01-2003 09:14 AM).] |
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