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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-01 06:49 AM



Absent Minded Moon

absent minded
he was a day dream
talking of things that
escaped me in sleep
telling me of a castle
built upon velvet
a reverie with beauty
on moon shined mountains
a true lullaby away
from the dark side
the very last point on
the edge of night
a long tall sweet drink
explored stirred in stars


"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-10-01 06:53 AM



IWIHWT...I really do.
I'm enjoying the imagery...
well done, Helen!

Darren
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2 posted 2003-10-01 07:51 PM


I love your words
and the things that you say
they touched and hugged me
and sparkled my day

I wish I could elaborate
for I feel it my duty
but these words have weakened me
i'm humbled by their beauty

Thank you Helen.

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3 posted 2003-10-01 08:31 PM


Hmmmmm....sounds dangerous...or dangerously good...if you meet this one again, we want a full report!

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4 posted 2003-10-01 09:28 PM


you are amazing red
passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-05-16 08:59 PM


amazing yes!
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