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Absent Minded Moon

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace


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Absent Minded Moon

absent minded
he was a day dream
talking of things that
escaped me in sleep
telling me of a castle
built upon velvet
a reverie with beauty
on moon shined mountains
a true lullaby away
from the dark side
the very last point on
the edge of night
a long tall sweet drink
explored stirred in stars


"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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IWIHWT...I really do.
I'm enjoying the imagery...
well done, Helen!
Darren
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I love your words
and the things that you say
they touched and hugged me
and sparkled my day

I wish I could elaborate
for I feel it my duty
but these words have weakened me
i'm humbled by their beauty

Thank you Helen.
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Hmmmmm....sounds dangerous...or dangerously good...if you meet this one again, we want a full report!

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you are amazing red
passing shadows
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amazing yes!
 
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