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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-10-01 02:52 AM



Hearts in Rhythm


Let us embrace each moment with songs
of romance as the melody serenades to
the song of hearts in rhythm

we both know this tune for our hearts wrote
the lyrics of love to each other

needlessly no orchestra could matrix our
song of hearts for it's only heard by each
heart in love

for it's only your fingertips that can trace
the love strings of my heart

whilst our kisses smack with sounds of
tambourines in rhythm sending us the
vibrations of love

and we embrace in passion our bodies
entangle sending music to our hearts
beating to the rhythm of love


                                                                

[This message has been edited by QjQ (10-01-2003 02:55 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-10-01 03:38 AM


Glenn, you write of love so beautifully
Marty Baird
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2 posted 2003-10-01 05:49 AM


Nice work your mastering expressing feelings
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3 posted 2003-10-01 06:06 AM


rhythm of love so well expressed, enjoyed your loving thoughts very much

Charisma

LeeJ
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4 posted 2003-10-01 06:34 AM


needlessly no orchestra could matrix our
song of hearts for it's only heard by each
heart in love


hugs....beautifully written

Vic
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5 posted 2003-10-01 08:46 AM


for it's only your fingertips that can trace
the love strings of my heart


How nice to feel this way about someone

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-10-01 08:48 AM


Glenn, absolutely the truth:

needlessly no orchestra could matrix our
song of hearts for it's only heard by each
heart in love

Beautiful writing FELT
xxoo

ethome
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7 posted 2003-10-01 09:02 AM


A very personal and intimate write....enjoyed the romantic read very much!


Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

QjQ
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8 posted 2003-10-02 12:35 PM




thanks everyone!!!!

                                                                   

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