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John B
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0 posted 2003-10-01 01:16 AM



you bruise your soul
you sun shine the past
you forget about the other ones
too and as well gleaming llike the rest

free style free flow
hot and mild, then things grow

rescue to then escape
then you're without the shape
just in or out ...

love me but take gifts.

© Copyright 2003 John Nathan Booker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-01 01:28 AM


Well done
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2 posted 2003-10-01 02:30 AM




(sigh) Wow, this is powerful, sweet friend, this is an excellent free-write, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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3 posted 2003-10-01 06:51 AM



hmmmm

great title...

especially to what is left behind.

Thank you!

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