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John B
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0 posted 2003-10-01 01:09 AM



We swallow all the glory because we forget who's came in his past...
He wants to help us to remember...
But remember he won't make us so don't ask...
Keep it all astride and make it all you've meshed
Vast and recieving like the moments you have masked..
Like the existence he has not yet rashed...
Always in the deep end..
But remember when we surface we will feel
his wrath.



© Copyright 2003 John Nathan Booker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-01 01:30 AM


Different,
I like.

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-10-01 08:10 AM


good write,,

                                                               

ethome
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3 posted 2003-10-01 08:20 AM


Sounds threatening!
Must be a religious theme.

Interesting write!

Eric

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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4 posted 2003-10-01 09:00 AM


John - Welcome
I apologize I missed your entrance
Ohh this reminded me, strangely
of Catholic School
*smile*
xxoo

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