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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2003-09-30 09:34 PM

Memories In Ripple
~*Marge Tindal*~

You swam 'cross my memory
in the shush of night
Rippling thoughts I had not waded
for such a long, long time~

I was not prepared to swim you again
Rippling ... rippling
Returning ...
to drown me once more~

~To the maker of ripples ... even after all this time
I still tread tears amid the ripples of you~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (09-30-2003 09:51 PM).]

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-09-30 09:42 PM

Lovely 'rippling' thoughts, Marge.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-09-30 11:06 PM

KEEPER!!!!!

Excellent, this is!

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

3 posted 2003-10-01 08:02 AM

Marge...Simple and very enjoyable. Love the connection between water ripples and memories. A

for sure.Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2003-10-01 08:05 AM

Marge I promise I won't drown ya! Honest I'll just swim around......
Hey is this another word out of the Marge Tindal library??

"shush"

He he cool poem Marge.....

Eric

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2003-10-01 09:08 AM

nicely done Marge... nice indeed..

sometimes the not being ready to swim is scary, and others, it seems we are dolphins once we jump in...

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2003-10-01 11:11 AM

This is beautiful Marge.
Eric

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

7 posted 2003-10-01 11:35 AM

Marge, this is exceptional. I love the words you used and yes, they brought me to a flood of tears remembering ...........

Well, that's a poem for another time.

Huggles, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-10-01 12:48 PM

Marge...hugglets

Marty Baird
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since 2003-09-20

Posts 90
Georgia, U.S.

9 posted 2003-10-01 02:46 PM

Thanks for your inspiration I enjoyed this piece

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

10 posted 2003-10-01 05:29 PM

It seems the ripples you write have a profound effect. Thanks for the tear in flow
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2003-10-01 06:10 PM

This is beautiful imagery, dear Marge.
You picture the night's memories so touchingly.
Love and hugs. Margherita

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2003-10-01 07:46 PM

Thanking you all~
Seems I'm just a puddle of poetic tears lately~

And ETHome~
Thank you for the *smile*
quote:
Hey is this another word out of the Marge Tindal library??

"shush"
Yes ... exactly~

*Huglets* all~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Betty
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

13 posted 2003-10-01 11:00 PM

I love this Marge.
Love ya,
Betty

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

14 posted 2003-10-01 11:35 PM

Memories in ripple touches my heart.For you don't deserve any ripples in life, only happy laughter.

Crystal

passing shadows
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Posts 45577
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15 posted 2004-05-16 08:58 PM

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