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Memories In Ripple

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Marge Tindal
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Memories In Ripple
~*Marge Tindal*~

You swam 'cross my memory
in the shush of night
Rippling thoughts I had not waded
for such a long, long time~

I was not prepared to swim you again
Rippling ... rippling
Returning ...
to drown me once more~



~To the maker of ripples ... even after all this time
I still tread tears amid the ripples of you~



~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (09-30-2003 09:51 PM).]

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vlraynes
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Lovely 'rippling' thoughts, Marge.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

KoKo
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KEEPER!!!!!

Excellent, this is!
Paul Wilson
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Marge...Simple and very enjoyable. Love the connection between water ripples and memories. A for sure.Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

ethome
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4 posted 10-01-2003 08:05 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Marge I promise I won't drown ya! Honest I'll just swim around......
Hey is this another word out of the Marge Tindal library??

"shush"

He he cool poem Marge.....

Eric
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nicely done Marge... nice indeed..

sometimes the not being ready to swim is scary, and others, it seems we are dolphins once we jump in...

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This is beautiful Marge.
Eric
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Marge, this is exceptional. I love the words you used and yes, they brought me to a flood of tears remembering ...........

Well, that's a poem for another time.  
Huggles, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

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Marge...hugglets
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Thanks for your inspiration I enjoyed this piece
Kethry
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It seems the ripples you write have a profound effect. Thanks for the tear in flow
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


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11 posted 10-01-2003 06:10 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

This is beautiful imagery, dear Marge.
You picture the night's memories so touchingly.
Love and hugs. Margherita
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 10-01-2003 07:46 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Thanking you all~
Seems I'm just a puddle of poetic tears lately~

And ETHome~
Thank you for the *smile*
quote:
Hey is this another word out of the Marge Tindal library??

"shush"
Yes ... exactly~

*Huglets* all~
~*Marge*~



~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

Betty
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I love this Marge.
Love ya,
Betty
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Memories in ripple touches my heart.For you  don't deserve any ripples in life, only happy laughter.
Crystal
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