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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-30 06:24 PM



Pineing


why is it
you have
been chasing
an illusive butterfly
out of season
playing on
needles trying
to recapture
the feel
you felt
with that smell

"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

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Edder
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1 posted 2003-09-30 06:33 PM


indeed there's something about that smell...
Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-09-30 08:39 PM


hugs and a bump
dingusjr
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3 posted 2003-09-30 08:42 PM


You are on my list slick lady for lady of the year.  I pine for you.
Oh, what is open season on butterflys?    Larry

icebox
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in the shadows
4 posted 2003-09-30 08:52 PM


The connection between smell and memory is not rational; it is chemical.

Another excellent poem.

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5 posted 2003-10-01 12:26 PM


wow...
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6 posted 2003-10-01 01:23 AM


For the life of me I do not know. Do you?

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7 posted 2003-10-01 01:38 AM




(big hugggsssssss) I don't care what that excuse is, on one side of the tree it will always smell like butterscotch, and on the other side vanilla! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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