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Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-09-30 12:37 PM


No Thanks!

Hey! You! Human!
I work all day in the hot burning sun.
I work all night to help keep
YOUR
environment clean.
What thanks do I get?
YOU come along and tear down my house.
If YOU get a chance YOU try to step on me.
So I try very hard to please.
I come in to YOUR house to help keep YOUR
environment clean.
What thanks do I get?
Here we go again-
YOU tear down my house and YOU try to step on me.
But! I’m fast on my feet, all twenty of them.
I got away that time, but wait until tonight.
Into YOUR bed I will creep.
Bite, bite, bite.
Oh! No! Look out!
“Squish.”

Love Bon-Bon

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-09-30 12:42 PM


hehehe...cute one
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-09-30 12:55 PM


dated a guy once who made me feel like this....hehehehhehe, just kidding
well, perhaps after reading this, I'll look at spiders a lot differently...although they "do" make my skin crawl....play on words there, hehehehhe...have a great day and thanks always for your humor and wit.  Love ya Lee J.

dingusjr
Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415
Missouri
3 posted 2003-09-30 01:13 PM


...the itsy, bitsy spider went up the water spout....thru the open window and straight into you snout....hehe, sorry!
Liked your poem,  Larry

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