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Open Poetry #29

Mind Walker

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-30 11:57 AM

Broad sands

sensing your sift through fine detail~

                                 at last

Restless mind walker

told me once of desire to become engulfed

                                 by wave

             to submerge from feet

                  til head

to keep on walking

where one cannot

to stroll

among swimmers

Restless

mind walker

basking the breadth

of the outline where you should have left me.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-09-30 11:59 AM

Gemma... this conjoured up a memory in me..but of a different kind of mind walker and of another tale that perhaps one day I will tell..so thank you for that...

now...for the poem.. lovely.. and haunting

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-09-30 12:32 PM

geez

just awesome!

the last line...punch!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-09-30 04:02 PM

yer amazing

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-09-30 04:07 PM

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

5 posted 2003-09-30 04:11 PM

I need you to write. nnnnnneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeedddddddd it!

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-10-01 07:34 AM

thankyou!

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