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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-10-02 11:17 AM





a wisp of white cloud
riding on a gentle wind
is all i notice

                                                                   

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-10-02 11:19 AM


So Zen! I like Zen! I like poem!


EA

n2dmystic
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2 posted 2003-10-02 11:26 AM


haiku.  Gezundheit! ;-} a blissful write.  nice.  

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-10-02 11:27 AM


Lovely....serene...much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2003-10-02 12:40 PM


Sounds completely comfortable.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-10-02 01:53 PM


So pretty... a mind that's tranquil, and serene.
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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6 posted 2003-10-02 02:44 PM




(smiles) Oh Glenn, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I too felt Zen reading this, this is so beautifully shamanistic, you good honor, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
7 posted 2003-10-02 05:14 PM


I love haiku..
Bonnie j
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8 posted 2003-10-02 05:20 PM


On the way home I was looking at the clouds and seen a puppy dog all stretched out. Always looking for pictures in the sky.
See Ya Bon-Bon

Lotus Breeze
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9 posted 2003-10-02 05:24 PM


To be so noticed
I would ride the gentle breeze
Being just a cloud

A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 2003-10-02 10:22 PM


enjoyed the short sweet picture!
some cloudy days are beautiful!
~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

vlraynes
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11 posted 2003-10-02 10:29 PM



Just lovely, Glenn.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Saunni
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12 posted 2003-10-02 11:13 PM


Glenn, it's as gentle as you are! Beautiful!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

angelblueyes
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13 posted 2003-10-03 01:08 AM


This brought me winds of serenity.
Crystal

LeeJ
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14 posted 2003-10-03 08:04 AM


serene and calming
nakdthoughts
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15 posted 2003-10-03 10:26 AM


I have been noticing the clouds lately...

nice~~

M

inkedgoddess
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16 posted 2003-10-03 10:49 AM





a wisp of white cloud
riding on a gentle wind
is all i notice

tracking the clouds flight
a wisp is all that remains
whats this life about?

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-03-2003 10:51 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2003-10-03 10:54 AM


QjQ
Well done.

passing shadows
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18 posted 2003-10-03 12:32 PM


very soothing
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