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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-09-30 10:44 AM


You want me to explain this all
when I don't even know how to feel,
because now I sit in wonderment
with an aching to know if it was   ever real....

and that is the pain that cuts
the very deepest of all,
it's the one that strips you of
your wings....
  and a soul begins to fall....

It doesn't matter what I say,
it doesn't matter what I do...
but damn I sure wish I understood...
oh how I wish that I still KNEW....




It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}
{you do what you do and you pay
for your sins, and there is no
such thing as what might have been...
that's a waste of time...
drive a man out of his mind...
{Tim McGraw}


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-30-2003 10:46 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-09-30 10:45 AM



Loose ends are not fun...
the raveling seems to continue
until we can tie them up
with knowledge...

Well done, Donna.

It's SO good to have you back!

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-09-30 10:53 AM


I know this feeling sweetie...
You have explained it well.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2003-09-30 11:13 AM


knowing is a luxury we often seem to be without...
I think that is where faith comes in...and it is easier for some than others..and others at times than for some...

here's to hoping you find a knowing..or the faith to lean on....



Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2003-09-30 12:32 PM


Kari, good to be around here again.
and no...loose ends aren't fun are they....
For some reason the word "closure" comes
to mind...

Nancy I'm not sure I know how to
'explain' it, but I sure am glad that you
understood it.  Hugs.

Capt, sometimes it is easier to
just know or believe than to
drive oneself crazy with the
wondering part of it...Its almost like a curse!
and yes, it seems that the only thing
that I really do "know" is that if
it weren't for my faith, I would
probably be more lost than
I already am.  Thanks for
stopping in....

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-02-2003 01:53 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-09-30 11:51 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Donna, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, sometimes I'd rather not know and just know the truth! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
6 posted 2003-10-01 12:01 PM


The closure, and not knowing thing is no fun at all. I hope for you lots of support through your hurts.
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2003-10-02 02:12 AM


and that is the pain that cuts
the very deepest of all,
it's the one that strips you of
your wings....
  and a soul begins to fall....

I'm feeling a bit clipped myself~
Hugs for you Donna~

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
8 posted 2003-10-02 02:15 AM



Yes...me too...

Hugs to you, Donna...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27
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beyond the doors of perception
9 posted 2003-10-02 04:26 AM


ultimately it only matters if it was real to you.  you decide, and move on.  very nice write.  thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

sigheyes
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the winds of destiny
10 posted 2003-10-02 08:09 AM


I feel every word of this with you friend.  

[This message has been edited by sigheyes (10-02-2003 08:24 AM).]

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