Believe In The Stars - an inspired write by Eagle Scorpion

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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08

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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2003-09-30 09:16 AM

this poem has a distict rhythym.. i hope you enjoy
:

:
-Joe

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Believe In The Stars

Wherever, I wonder
Whomever has been
whatsoever within
a lost time
so unknown

and however
a person
like that is
just feeling
and living
the life that
is hers but
not mine, yet,
to see, oh
the wonder
of we and
the cold ghastly
whispering truth
of for granted things taken

But please listen,
I hope you're
not missin'
the love that
I send to
the love that
is you and
the love in
your voice and
your eyes
theres a moon
and a light
and some manner
of somthing
unknown and
unseen but
just something that we
can believe in look on
to the wonder, BELIEVE
in the stars and
you'll see that You Are
in your heart.

~..Throughout life, people come and go. Some people come back..~

[This message has been edited by EagleScorpion (09-30-2003 09:17 AM).]

Marty Baird
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since 2003-09-20

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Georgia, U.S.

1 posted 2003-09-30 09:21 AM

I enjoyed your poem thanks

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2003-09-30 09:30 AM

Wow, this is very deep and sensitive writing
I really couldn't even pick a fav line
it just sucked me in from begining to ending...
just fantastic writing, one of my favs of yours. Library time..Watching you grow in your writing has been a pleasure for us!

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-30-2003 09:43 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-09-30 09:42 AM

EagleScorpion
The eagle has a sharp eye. Enjoyed.

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

4 posted 2003-09-30 05:27 PM

i think this is my first decent piece of writing in years..

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-09-30 08:09 PM

Young man, this is probably one of the best poems you have ever written. I know it's a keeper in my library...I have a feeling a lot of others will think so, too!

Balladeer

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6 posted 2003-09-30 08:49 PM

Not only is it a decent piece of writing it is one that you can take pride in creating.

Nice writing, poet

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2003-09-30 09:00 PM

Joseph~
There is much beauty in this write~
Thank you for entrusting it to our eyes~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

8 posted 2003-09-30 09:31 PM

Very much enjoyed this piece. Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2003-09-30 10:36 PM

EagleScorpion - I read the rhythmn in this
and I did enjoy very much...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-10-01 02:26 AM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, I absolutely love this, I am so happy you're back and this has become my favorite of yours also! (big hugggssssssss) This is a must-keep for my angel libary, sweet friend, God Bless You, and know YOU belong to YOUR heart forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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displaced

11 posted 2003-10-01 02:49 AM

I enjoyed this very much, thank you

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2003-10-01 10:01 AM

lil'

smiling and enjoying this poem sooo much.....

Paula Finn
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missouri

13 posted 2003-10-01 10:17 AM

Its been a while since I've read your stuff...this one really touches the soul...

Mysteria

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British Columbia, Canada

14 posted 2003-10-02 02:11 AM

I have to ditto Balladeer, this piee of work is really something to be very proud of, take that bow.

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

15 posted 2003-10-03 01:46 AM

You have every right to be proud.This leaps with greatness from the page.

Crystal

EagleScorpion
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Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

16 posted 2003-10-07 09:44 PM

yeah i dont like 90% of the things i put on piptalk. in fact, i hate most of the things i have been putting on here.. but this one i can happily say i am, indeed, proud of.. thanks to you all for your warm replies

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