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bashlovesemma
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since 2003-09-23
Posts 25


0 posted 2003-09-30 08:51 AM


Hi it's me again, more personal poems!


(doesnt have a name)

I sit here waiting,
Everyday and every Night,
I sit hear every night,
Wait till morning light,
Just to see the your beautiful sight,
You walk past,
You walk past my house,
You’d say hi
This time you never,
This time you said nothing,
Not even a goodbye.

Please Lord,
Take care of her,
She did her best
She’s paying the price,
Now she’s in heaven,
She never reached 20,
How could you take her life?
All for nothing,
Please just keep her safe,

This life I lead,
Young and free,
Now at college,
And so was she,
Now she’s gone
College life’ll not be the same,
Her life was taken,
Its such a shame,

Everyone loved her,
Some more than others,
Now I’m crying’ now it’s time to shut the
Shutters

Just because they’re closed doesn’t mean I don’t think,
If I could do anything to change the past,
Change all the regret,
But the things she did I wont ever forget,
I lie here, looking up at the stars,
I lay here resting; now ive closed my eyes.

By Sean


[This message has been edited by bashlovesemma (10-01-2003 04:09 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-09-30 08:59 AM


bashlovesemma
Dramatic, enjoyed the read.

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-09-30 08:59 PM


Very sad...:'(

SharaRose ~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

bashlovesemma
Junior Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 25

3 posted 2003-10-01 06:02 AM


yeah i know.

I miss her

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