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To Those That Care
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To Those That Care |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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To those that Care I’ve left you a life of blurbs Perhaps you can undo the verbs The puzzle is a life of search That may have left you in a lurch I was so busy with the deed I may have left you in some need But if you can forgive me now Then I’ll forgive myself somehow. There were some paintings I recall That took my heart and my enthrall That left you in a shadows gray That riles you to this very day But here and now I do explain I didn’t mean to give you pain For I was looking for the awe That opens up my souls explore And if some day you take my path I pray you do not feel the wrath. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A little wrath is good for the soul, Sy. Enjoyed every blurb.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, sir, you are in good form this morning,,,hello and good morning sir poet...and how are you and the family doing today...hope all is well and wishing you a perfect sunshinny day! Muuuaaaahhhhhh! and thank you for writing and sharing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun You are right sweety.  LeeJ I am fine and thank you for the read. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
But here and now I do explain I didn’t mean to give you pain For I was looking for the awe That opens up my souls explore excellent verse for the soul this morning Sey. Morning hugs. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, And the top of the morning to you sweet.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I’ve left you a life of blurbs Perhaps you can undo the verbs The puzzle is a life of search That may have left you in a lurch I was so busy with the deed I may have left you in some need But if you can forgive me now Then I’ll forgive myself somehow. ======================================== Sy-babers...I do so love the humility of this soulful write... anyone ever tell ya how good heart on sleeve looks on your verbs and blurbs?  *ww*  *Im taking the package to the Post Office in a couple hours...you should have it by the end of the week.* "If you feel heartbreak, distant thunder, lightning, earthquakes ... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I hope you count me in with those that care, Sy... because each man's wrath is but nature's sigh for those who truly don't feel don't bargain with life so well as you and I have sought to do found in the words we spell... verb on, McDuff.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Wonderful morning read today! Quite chilly and damp here this morn.. Ready for your tea? You stay put...I'll pour. ~Morning hugs and tea, Nancy~
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are forever my Tinkerbell. And am lost within your spell. WWRS Sunshine, I knew you would understand. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, I'll stay still, you pour. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is so beautiful, because it's your heart speaking. We can't avoid some wrath, but we can surely overcome it. Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita I agree. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you my dear. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...Always a pleasure to read one of the best poets I know...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed the read,,,, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paul, Thank you so much QjQ, Glad you enjoed. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Those who seek forgiveness so humbly are usually those who haven't done anything needing forgiving... it's just their nature to make sure no harm is done. *S* I like this very much, Seymour... count me among those who care. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern I do, I do. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed this one. It made me think and wonder. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pilgrimage Glad you enjoyed and thank you for the read. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...I need to give you a hug if that's alright.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie That's just fine with me. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
There were some paintings I recall That took my heart and my enthrall That left you in a shadows gray That riles you to this very day But here and now I do explain I didn’t mean to give you pain For I was looking for the awe That opens up my souls explore Seymour, you are so sweet. I've asked forgiveness before, when I honestly didn't intend to hurt...but did. I don't want to cause anyone pain, and I know that you don't either. If we do, it's never intentional. Thanks for sharing this part of your heart today, my friend.  Hugs to you  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) The nerve to ask of forgiveness is where the simple wrath is, but once the deed is done, there is no wrath and all becomes bliss when the toothache is endured! (sigh) You speak of this act ever so well, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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