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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-09-30 07:37 AM



Slipping into the dark midnight sky,
I fly within the realm of blue
in search of peace,
in search of you,
but do not know
if you are there
or if you are,
if you care

to know the world is in great pain
and can’t find the medicine wheel
to steer itself back again
onto the road to Peace.

So,
if you are out there and
if you care,
could you please spare
a moment or two?

Thanking you,
in advance.


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-30 07:40 AM


ah..the medicine wheel..and all it represents is a wonderful image to convey the harmony...

nicely done my friend... now how many moments did you need??



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2 posted 2003-09-30 07:42 AM


LOL, as many as can be spared. Dontcha just love specific, precise answers?
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3 posted 2003-09-30 07:48 AM


seems to me we often can't define the things or scope of what it is we want..or need.. no shame in that..no sin in being vague...

Pick you moments.
one carefully chosen
for its ripe flavor
another for it shell
still another seems to float
on sand as if a shell
that spirals in and on itself
a hiding place perhaps
but chose them wisely
oh my friend
once gone
we never get them back



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4 posted 2003-09-30 07:52 AM


So, even holding on tighter than tight doesn't work? WAHHHH.
I love your thoughtful replies.

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5 posted 2003-09-30 07:57 AM


thoughtful??? me????

you trying to ruin my reputation??? LOL


Midnitesun
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6 posted 2003-09-30 08:02 AM


Well, since your reputation is spread all over this place, I'm afraid there's nothing I can do to save your whatsit
Too bad I have to leave the PC for a couple of hours! But I'll be back home for some more fun later.

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7 posted 2003-09-30 08:07 AM


beautiful poem, in my book, I believe they are there, and indeed do care...it's just a matter of time until you meet...prepared and ripe and ready...spiritually, so that you will both be endowed by each other.  Love and hugs.
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8 posted 2003-09-30 08:12 AM


Midnitesun
Love the way you talk.

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9 posted 2003-09-30 08:13 AM


Yep a question we all ponder from time to time...is that one person truly out there...somewhere??  Well done Kacy.
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10 posted 2003-09-30 08:45 AM



hand in hand
the circles begins
to take the wheel
from thoughtless spin
to guide the course
to settle in
hand in hand
the healing begins...

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11 posted 2003-09-30 08:50 AM


The wheel is always turning and the road of peace is in constant need of repair.  I'll see what I can still do.

*smile*

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12 posted 2003-10-01 09:48 AM


Kacy . . .

you arent from around here now, are you?
*smile*
(I knew that already)
A beautiful timeless soul . . .
xxoo

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13 posted 2003-10-01 11:54 AM


thanking each of you
for the gift of sharing some moments
here in this blue sanctuary

passing shadows
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14 posted 2003-11-14 01:12 AM


beautiful
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15 posted 2003-11-14 06:06 PM


nice
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16 posted 2003-11-14 06:24 PM


someone grab the wheel!  wonderful write!

Rf

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17 posted 2003-11-14 06:31 PM


we search, we search
we spin, we spin
we hope the wheel
becalms within
-glider-

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