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Open Poetry #29

My Tired Spirit

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

0 posted 2003-09-30 02:06 AM

Sitting
with the feeling breathing
knowing that I am tired
needing
embraced by the memories of
once yet slowly fading
a flash of forever seen
on a teardrop
while I slept
I saw the teardrop I felt
weak as I watched it
slowly travel the cheek
of an angel
watching me
knowing I need her
she took my hand and smiled
the tear in her eye sparkled as she
held me
so I could rest.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-09-30 02:12 AM

I have experienced this before

nice to see you here again stranger

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

2 posted 2003-09-30 02:15 AM

at first I began to feel sad, but it wrapped up quite lovely. thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

3 posted 2003-10-01 01:19 AM

Thank you both for your kind words, its nice to be back

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