navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #29 » Butterfly, Butterfly (for -CP)
Open Poetry #29
Post A Reply Post New Topic Butterfly, Butterfly (for -CP) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-09-30 12:49 PM


Hi, Chelsea...this is the poem I mentioned. This is when I first started wring about 2 and half years ago. I don't write maaaavelous like the other ones here, but I wanted to share it with you. I hope you like it.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Butterfly, Butterfly



Butterfly, butterfly
Look at you,
You have wings so beautiful
Wing’s of two.

Beauty so grand
For our eyes to see
Flutter and fly
Come back to me.

Look where you come from
To what you've came to be

trapped inside
Your cocoon you did hide
Now look at you
On beautiful wings
You can glide

Flower to flower
Hour after hour
Such a tiny creature
With so much power

Power to show us what we can be
The beauty we have inside
For all to see!



Love,
Shara~





Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-09-30 02:08 AM


terrifically penned,,,,

                                                            

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-09-30 02:11 AM


just beautiful! I"m sure she'll love this!
n2dmystic
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception
3 posted 2003-09-30 02:12 AM


pretty, and nice, and pretty nice ;-}

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

CP
Junior Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 17

4 posted 2003-09-30 04:32 PM


Thank you.  Very pretty.  I liked it a lot

-CP

Patricia
Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
5 posted 2003-09-30 04:51 PM


Ms. Rose,

This is lovely...I love butterflies, too.  Thanks for thinking about Chelsea and posting this beautiful poem for her!

Hugs,
Patricia

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2003-09-30 05:03 PM


I love the fluttery feel of this.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
7 posted 2003-09-30 08:07 PM


Thank you to all of you. Hugs to all!

QJQ--Thanks Q for reading.

passing shadow--I am glad you liked. I sure hoped she would like it. I was just starting out like her. She reminded me of the beginnings with her BUTTERFLY poem, and this was one of my first ones.

n2dmystic--thanks..hehe..now someone else said poems can be pretty. (hug)

CP-- Hi, thanks. I was reading yours, started thinking about how nervous I was. I'm glad you liked.

Patricia--Thanks. I love them, too. Someday,,if I ever take the time to learn how to make my own site, and can get help with it, I would like to have one with butterfly theme. It was a pleasure to share this with her.

Kethry--Thank you. I appreciate the read.

Love,
SharaRose~


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
8 posted 2003-09-30 11:24 PM






(smiles) Oh Shara, this is beautiful, sweet friend, Chelsea has so much talent just like you too and I spead butterfly hugs to both of you, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Shara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
9 posted 2003-09-30 11:26 PM


Hugs to you Noah...Love ya lots,
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

angelblueyes
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
10 posted 2003-09-30 11:28 PM


This is beautiful and I know she'll love it. you may not think your writing is maaavelous but simply put you're maverrrolous darlling.
Crystal

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
11 posted 2003-10-01 12:46 PM


Shara, you are sooooo sweet!! This is a
very loving thing you did for our new little
member, Chelsea. I just know that she will
love this. It will really make her feel good.
Hugs to you both  
Ethel

SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
12 posted 2003-10-01 12:55 PM


Thank you to both of you...

Angelblueyes-- Thank you, darling!

garysgirl-- Thank you Ethel. I am just glad she liked. Love ya for the kind words that were [*MEANT*] Much appreciated.
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #29 » Butterfly, Butterfly (for -CP)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary