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Autumnal Haiku Trio
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Autumnal Haiku Trio |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Autumnal Haiku Trio ~*Marge Tindal*~ Autumnal phases Drifting colors across lawn Summer warmth soon gone~ Breezing winds of change Billowing technicolor Pirouetting leaves~ Red and yellow hues Dance across ground in surround Fall sighs heavily~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Yes! Fall sighs heavily because she knows winter with its snow and ice and biting wind is around the corner! A delightful haiku trio Marge. I enjoyed them so much. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Ahh, so beautiful. I found this park near me...lived here all of my life and never knew it existed. The trail leads to the Mississippi River. It is covered in arch by grand green right now, but soon Autumn will color the way, and I can't wait! Lovely, Marge! Patricia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You out did yourself.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautiful Marge.... Soon the colours will be here.. Soon...Autumn in all her glory. ~Hugs~
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I sigh heavily too when I think of winter at my door! However, I am not going to dwell on it when there are such beautiful days still to enjoy! Betty Lou Hebert |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
These are beautiful, Marge. Hugs,  ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like these very much, my friend... beautiful! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ah, you all are GREAT~ I hear syllables dancing Seventeen in all~  Yet in my reply No naturistic thoughts flow Must be Senryu~ They are ADDICTING !!! *Huglets* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
You've painted a beautiful picture for us all to enjoy Marge. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
so seasonal, can't wait till fall is in full effect "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This reminds me of how today feels .. ver fall like. Betty |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Marge, You're the sweetest poetess that I know and this shows exactly why.You've touched me right before sweet dreamtime.  Crystal |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sweet! More haiku from you, oh yes! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Haiku or senyru... you do them well enough to bring me back again! *S* |
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