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mytuesdaywishes
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a voice from the musicbox

0 posted 2003-09-29 07:01 PM


people will find religion when they're on the heels of death.
and people cry at movies, and people smoke their meth.
people will dream up battle scenes to be played in the form of a waltz.
and people laugh at children, and people brag their faults.
people will find something to hold on to when they're huddled in the corner.
and people carry umbrellas, and people scoff at foreigners.
people will dance to angry words when their liquor is holding well.
and people reach for heaven, and people fall to hell.
people will tell their theories when in pleasant company.
and people cast their judgements, and people leave debris.
people will hurt themselves when they're left to be alone.
and people deserve people, and people need a home.
people will love people when they're going mad on creation.
and people live beside us, and people are our salvation.
people will tell you the world's a light when they're blinded by the stage.
and people are my pen, and people are my page.

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

© Copyright 2003 Rachael - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-09-29 07:07 PM


Feels nice to create. Bringing things to life with your page, and pen. I like!
Love,
Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-30 09:18 PM


nice penning,,,

                                                               

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3 posted 2003-10-01 03:48 PM


"people will find religion when they're on the heels of death."

Sadly..true.

Wind
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4 posted 2003-10-01 03:56 PM


this is awsome

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Bonfirelight
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5 posted 2003-10-28 04:21 AM


Superb.

Jes
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6 posted 2003-10-29 06:46 AM


I liked this one hehehe its sometimes weird to get told how we actually act because somehas watched how we are.

But you have a wonderfull way to tell what you write about smile.

But i also liked this one abit cause i can see this entence like picture it. " people reach for heaven, and people fall to hell "

Smile

Jes


littlewing
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7 posted 2003-10-29 08:58 AM


Rachel?

oh mann these are awesome lines:

people will tell you the world's a light when they're blinded by the stage.
and people are my pen, and people are my page.

blew me away, truly
xxoo

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