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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-10-02 10:34 AM



It's here.

If I can't taste you on the
lips of God -

I will never know a kiss.

It's here.

There are prayers we whisper only
with the breath.

They carry warm across the valleys
of our flesh.

It's here.

Tonight...there is no need to reach
beyond the borders of our bodies.

It's here.

Always.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2003-10-02 10:45 AM


Now this is beautifully touching, and I much enjoyed the thoughts...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-10-02 11:13 AM


And there's a big smile going on "here"!

Love & Romance!
EA

prwohl
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3 posted 2003-10-02 11:21 AM


Of all the poems that I have read including my own very few have left me speachless and not knowing how to say what it has made me feel. This one has.

Beautiful words!

Live life to the fullest!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-10-02 11:23 AM


Beautiful Eric!
Yes...........here.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

QjQ
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5 posted 2003-10-02 11:48 AM


good write,,,

                                                                   

Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-10-02 01:30 PM



I sincerely hope
you have your always, Eric,
for I cannot see you writing
any other way...

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-10-02 02:52 PM




(smiles) Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, love is always seen through ones eyes and tears and smiles and that proves love is not all in passion but simply in atmosphere! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
8 posted 2003-10-02 08:18 PM


Eric?

Love is simple, people make it hard
Beautiful . . .

It's here.

Always.

Perfect
xxoo

A Romantic Heart
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9 posted 2003-10-02 10:17 PM


Simple truths, a simple love!

enjoyed~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

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