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Come Tears To Fall

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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...


25 posted 10-21-2003 05:58 PM       View Profile for MARK V SHELDON   Email MARK V SHELDON   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit MARK V SHELDON's Home Page   View IP for MARK V SHELDON

I truly must echo the comments of those before me...  This was...  "apparitional" and "melaniscent".  That's the best I can come up with at the moment.  Very nice, Ron.

-MVS

P.S.,

...and a very striking title, too!

You CAN make a difference: http://educate-yourself.org/

[This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (10-21-2003 05:59 PM).]

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


26 posted 10-31-2003 09:01 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Time is right...
LeeJ
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SE PA


27 posted 10-31-2003 09:14 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

absolute beauty here...both the poetry and your heart....put them together and you've got one fine day....smiles and hugs...
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


28 posted 11-01-2003 07:26 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

I relish this time
In a lament of summers gone
That wails on the gales to come
And those prematurely born
from some rogue mass
Of high pressure passing.

You are just too cool and a such a talented poet!!!
Love those lines, Cpat!
Duncan
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29 posted 11-01-2003 11:32 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

"“I would cry for you”
I reply,

for all the darkened skies
and all the winter storms
that lie now unborn
shall be the bleak
that draws out my sigh

shall break the weakened
heart of limb with ice

but not yet…
for still the sun graces me
with days of passing warm
and you stand poised
to add your fine cloth of colors
to the hillside
where you,
in splendid vanity lean out
o’er the edge of lake
to see the reflected beauty
of such dress
then grace the waters skin
in the float of wind stripped rags

It is not time to cry for you…

I will save those tears for now

And wait

Until naked you shiver
          bare limbs awry
without the robes your form so craves

then I will weep
             for green"

Where the hell have I been??  
Amazing...unbelievably amazing.  
I don't believe I realized how much I've missed reading you.

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence


30 posted 11-02-2003 12:02 AM       View Profile for pandonov   Email pandonov   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit pandonov's Home Page   View IP for pandonov

original
passing shadows
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displaced


31 posted 11-02-2003 02:11 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

too many great lines to pick out...just know I liked this ALOT
littlewing
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since 03-02-2003
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New York


32 posted 11-02-2003 10:58 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

there she stands
nearly naked, bare
stripped of her dignity
fallen about her feet
dreams, hope and fate
acclimation, acclimation
singing songs a shrill caw
heard in the mist
a lone tear escapes
from sky to branch to twig
stopping to taste
the bitterness of existence
only for a second
before forming, frozen
upon her arms, legs
ultimately her face
I shall not cry
I know this path
the circle,
I witness each passing season
as a notch on my
life
as it is upon her own

Ron this is beautiful
thank you for inspiring me
xxoo  
Midnitesun
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Gaia


33 posted 11-02-2003 11:28 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

*sighing*

shiver me timbers,
you've done it again, Ron
Mistletoe Angel
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City of Roses


34 posted 11-02-2003 03:53 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel





(big hugggsssssss) There's always the right to cry, but there has to be a good timing to it and in this particular time of year it can be overwhelming! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Janet Marie
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35 posted 04-20-2004 04:04 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I know the werk monster has been keeping you busy...just wanted ya to know you are missed groovy guy.
 
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