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n2dmystic
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beyond the doors of perception

0 posted 2003-09-29 04:00 PM


Feedback welcome.  I'll be in tonight to visit.  Peace, Joe


I grew up in a very dysfunctional family, so love isn't something that I had a firm grasp on.  This one is about trying to work it out with someone from similar beginnings.  Those of us with broken pickers tend to attract, and pick, those with broken pickers. 1990


Love hurts.
I thought.
That’s what
they
taught
me.

So now,
to love,
I hurt.
You.
Me.
Us.
Why?
They
taught
me.

I quit!
What?
Loving?
Hurting?
No!
Loving hurt.
Hurting love.

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-09-29 04:02 PM



When we can recognize
what pulls us down,
we can make a conscious effort
to ignore the bad, having learned
the lesson first hand,
and get on with doing it right...

so we can hand it down
as it should be.

Well done, Sir...

Martie
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2 posted 2003-09-29 04:34 PM




What Sunshine said...and yep, a real good place to start healing is writing about it.  Wishing you the best!

n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception
3 posted 2003-09-30 01:16 AM


rest at ease, friends.  I wrote it in 1990.  I'm now dealing with new cra_  ;-}.  thank you for your concern

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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