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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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New York

0 posted 2003-09-29 03:22 PM

Tip to toe
she glances
a dance
as the day
he released her
from palm sorely lined
to sky

as a bird in flight, an angel

Residing within
sanctuary
She came to him
in nakedness and naiveté
giving to him

All that she was

And he
opening sill of window
pain
Oh, silent night
she sang
sweet lullaby
from his fingers
she bled
his blood

and as one
they slept . . .

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littlewing http://www.alwaysontherun.net/jimi.htm

[This message has been edited by littlewing (09-29-2003 03:32 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-09-29 03:26 PM

Just beautiful Sue....
and I would say....challenge well met!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2003-09-29 03:27 PM

challenge well met Sue, and very brilliantly at that! Very nice...

Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

3 posted 2003-09-29 03:39 PM

Sue- Why am I not suprised at the song choice??? lol
This is one of your better efforts. I'm sure Brother James would be proud.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

Martie

Moderator

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California

4 posted 2003-09-29 03:43 PM

Beautifully done, Sue!

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-09-29 03:59 PM

Bravo!!

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2003-09-29 04:08 PM

"When I'm sad
she comes to me

With a thousand smiles
she gives to me free

It's alright she says
it's alright

Take anything you want from me
anything

Anything.'

So, says she...

And so say I.

Kiss

n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

7 posted 2003-09-29 04:09 PM

well written. beautiful piece. thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-09-29 04:14 PM

Well....this melts....

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2003-09-29 05:01 PM

WOW Sue Wow... I'm with Sunshine...this definitely melts.

keeping it

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2003-09-29 05:06 PM

Wonderful Sue, and you sure met the challenge that is for sure, so I think I will keep my opinion of Jim to maself here.

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

11 posted 2003-09-29 05:18 PM

Littlewing (did I ever tell you how much my girls love that name)...(sorry, I just had to say that) this is wonderful. Masterful artistry of word.

Patricia

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

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Somewhere out there~

12 posted 2003-09-29 05:57 PM

Beautiful!

Love,
Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

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VA

13 posted 2003-09-29 06:01 PM

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2003-09-29 08:41 PM

(smiles) Oh Sue, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, Jimi Hendrix is one of my biggest inspirations, "Purple Haze" and "Castles Made Of Sand" especially get to me and are among my favorites of all time! (kiss on cheek) No one can ever outplay Jimi Hendrix, it's a shame he passed away too young but one thing is for sure, his legacy is forever secure! God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2003-09-29 09:12 PM

littlewing
Enjoyed the read.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

16 posted 2003-09-30 12:13 PM

Sue...
you never cease to amaze me.
This is so absolutely beautiful, me sis.

Love it...love you...

And?...smiling at Ed's reply too...
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

17 posted 2003-09-30 12:21 PM

Excellent!

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

18 posted 2003-09-30 01:46 AM

Who wouldn't enjoy this?

I'm so impressed with this writing, I must save it.

Thank you!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

19 posted 2003-09-30 09:40 AM

Thank you Nancy - always a smile and a hug

Hey Spirit - thank you so much

Ahh Brad, I sure hope so and believe it or not, it took me a long time to come up with a tune - thank you

Thank you so much Martie and Susan

Ed - Thy will be done
*smile*
Thank you for that . . . truly
isleofviewarebeautiful

Hey mystic, cool name Welcome, I missed your entrance and thank you

Karilea, so sayeth the sun . . .
*smile* thank you

Thank you Maree - from you
that brings a smile upon my face this morning

Shaon, thank you  . . .. tell tell please?

Patricia - Oh my so very cool . . . is no wonder (to Jimi) I believe she was an angel of sorts thank you

Hey Shara - thank you so much means a lot to me

Kris . . . thank you saw yours and just  *sigh*  beautiful

Noah - you got that right, for sure and thank you so much for the graphics -
*smile* so sweet to me

Hey Sy - thank you so much

Vicky? yes, me too very much so and thank you, sweet sis for being so beautiful yourself

Hey icey - thank you so much

Meg?  you have brought a good challenge indeed and I am loving seeing you blaze through here . . . thank you

Thanks guys
xxoo

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

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the ass-end of space

20 posted 2003-09-30 04:06 PM

simply perfect

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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New York

21 posted 2003-10-01 09:43 AM

Thank you Raph, thought you would appreciate this
xxoo

PouringJewels
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since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

22 posted 2003-10-02 09:31 AM

I loved your spirit using Jimi my age good work.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

23 posted 2003-10-02 08:19 PM

Hey Julia, was wondering where
you have been
thank you
*smile*
xxoo

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

24 posted 2003-10-03 06:45 AM

astoundingly soft, loving, kind, your poetry is simply songs to the mind...thank you

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

25 posted 2003-10-03 06:51 AM

Make love, make love, make love, make love.

yea, hes the man, aint he?
anyhow, im here, but im gone, funny u know,
like jimi i guess
xoxoxox

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