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A Tear That Was Not Mine
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A Tear That Was Not Mine |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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A Tear That Was Not Mine ~*Marge Tindal*~ I have known the sorrow of tear that was not mine Felt it slip from eye of friend from a heart of not-yet-mend~ Watched it surge in tearful purge bringing sobs with no relief Wondered whatever could I do to unburden friend of such grief~ Realized in silent attend I could hold the tear of friend Caress it with such gentle care until the need of fall was bared~ Tenderly ... I wrap my thoughts around the shoulders of sisterly pine Knowing that in hold of friend the tear has now become mine~ ~Sometimes there are no words~ Gentle hugs for Muys in the loss of her sister September 2003 ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful, compassionate, touching write, dear Marge. Tears dry easier when they are shared. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just beautiful, Marge *s M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Marge...so thoughtful of you. ~Heart Hugs, Nancy~
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Marge, my dearest friend, I know Muys will be very grateful for your thoughtfulness. I'll print it out and will give it to her tomorrow when we drive down there.  TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge you are such a wonderful friend to all. This was so full of emotion. I know Muys will appreciate it & re-read it often. Love, Betty |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...A beautiful poem and tribute to Muys sister. Your heart is truly made of gold...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Understanding...that is what each of us wants... Beautiful, not only the poem, but the poet's heart. Patricia |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Such a caring and loving poem for Muys! I'm sure she will appreciate it very much. Betty Lou Hebert |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge~ This is such a beautiful gift of friendship and love for Muys. I'm sure she will love it, and love you for writing it. Hugs,  ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi Marge, This is lovely. It even made me a little teary. You're a wonderful friend, and I'm sure that Muys appreciates your support. Bec  "I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hugs and prayers... just beautiful.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a very gentle and comforting write...of caring..and of sharing the understand.. when someone's tear indeed becomes you own.. nicely done... very nice |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What tender comfort you've penned here... this is as beautiful as your heart, my friend. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marge, this is a beautiful and caring poem for Muys. Very compassionate and loving. Thank you for sharing it with us. Muys, I am very sorry for the loss of your sister. My thoughts and prayers are with you, sweet lady. Heart hugs to you both Ethel |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Marge, this is so gentle, and well-expressed. There is no consolation for loss, but time and the caring of friends. Like you. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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